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"Honey - Do's", by Cortney Matz (alias: Sunshine Girl)
 
_Sunshine_ - 02:13pm Apr 14, 1998 PST
...redefining Normal, one day at a time.

Hey, thanks for coming to read my story! It's my first attempt at a mystery, but I hope you'll all enjoy it. PLEASE feel free to critique, whether constructive or not - I want to know what you really, really think.

Enjoy!


  • "Here, Fred, I've made you a list," Gloria told... by _Sunshine_ - Apr 14, 98 (#1 of 72)
  • Oscar, too scared even to wet his pants, remained... by _Sunshine_ - Apr 14, 98 (#2 of 72)
  • "To tell you the truth," Foreman replied, "I hoped... by _Sunshine_ - Apr 14, 98 (#3 of 72)
  • I think there should have been a little more build... by Ronald Kimball - Apr 14, 98 (#4 of 72)
  • Thanks for your comments, guys!.. by _Sunshine_ - Apr 14, 98 (#5 of 72)
  • Sunshine: Good job... by JDough - Apr 14, 98 (#6 of 72)
  • JB: I know, and I thought of that, but couldn't... by _Sunshine_ - Apr 14, 98 (#7 of 72)
  • Sunshine Bravo, Kudos, Encore!!!!.. by Fran Hinkel - Apr 15, 98 (#8 of 72)
  • Oh, I forgot to mention, I also thought the title... by Fran Hinkel - Apr 15, 98 (#9 of 72)
  • Oh yeah, I forgot to mention, I don't get the... by Ronald Kimball - Apr 15, 98 (#10 of 72)
  • Ronald -Ah, I hadn't thought of that (re: the edit... by _Sunshine_ - Apr 15, 98 (#11 of 72)
  • I read the story twice and I think I missed... by Marcellus Barbee - Apr 15, 98 (#12 of 72)
  • On that note, how's this for a glowing... by _Sunshine_ - Apr 15, 98 (#13 of 72)
  • Woops!.. by JDough - Apr 15, 98 (#14 of 72)
  • Jane (*propping eyelids up* this site is too... by _Sunshine_ - Apr 15, 98 (#15 of 72)
  • Or , Foreman seems unaffected at first as he gets... by _Sunshine_ - Apr 15, 98 (#16 of 72)
  • Nah...leave it, or have Oscar remember it... by JDough - Apr 15, 98 (#17 of 72)
  • Oh, JB, don't get depressed!.. by _Sunshine_ - Apr 16, 98 (#18 of 72)
  • The story was interestingly written but somewhat... by Wes Hyatt - Apr 16, 98 (#19 of 72)
  • Sunshine: Nah, doesn't help... by JDough - Apr 16, 98 (#20 of 72)
  • Sunshine Girl: Liked your story!.. by Dina Hagler - Apr 17, 98 (#21 of 72)
  • Thanks, Dina... by _Sunshine_ - Apr 17, 98 (#22 of 72)
  • Wes -Sorry to be so long in answering your post... by _Sunshine_ - Apr 18, 98 (#23 of 72)
  • I really like this... by Simon - Apr 19, 98 (#24 of 72)
  • Oh, oh, oh!!.. by _Sunshine_ - Apr 20, 98 (#25 of 72)
  • I like it, girl!.. by Simon - Apr 20, 98 (#26 of 72)
  • I can think of one song about murder: Murder by... by Ronald Kimball - Apr 21, 98 (#27 of 72)
  • Sunshine: I love it--that's just the kind of song... by JDough - Apr 21, 98 (#28 of 72)
  • Sunshine Here's an idea... by Fran Hinkel - Apr 22, 98 (#29 of 72)
  • Sunshine: Nah...not as good... by JDough - Apr 24, 98 (#30 of 72)
  • I agree with jane barth (#31)... by Robert Nelson - May 12, 98 (#31 of 72)
  • I like Rob's idea the best!.. by Dina Hagler - May 13, 98 (#32 of 72)
  • I must admit that I took my time getting round to... by Alex Dent - May 13, 98 (#33 of 72)
  • Well, geez, I didn't think anyone was on pins and... by _Sunshine_ - May 13, 98 (#34 of 72)
  • Robert: We are all in suspense, now... by JDough - May 13, 98 (#35 of 72)
  • Okay, we already know that Peace is not very... by Peace Destounis - May 16, 98 (#36 of 72)
  • Peace, you're too kind... by _Sunshine_ - May 16, 98 (#37 of 72)
  • Jist a-doin' ma job, ma'am... by Peace Destounis - May 16, 98 (#38 of 72)
  • Peace: She's something, isn't she?.. by JDough - May 19, 98 (#39 of 72)
  • Okay Jane... by Peace Destounis - May 19, 98 (#40 of 72)
  • *gulp* Um, okay... by _Sunshine_ - May 19, 98 (#41 of 72)
  • Hey!.. by Peace Destounis - May 19, 98 (#42 of 72)
  • Sunshine Girl, I think that is great news... by Dina Hagler - May 19, 98 (#43 of 72)
  • Peace -Thanks - that was primarily for JB's... by _Sunshine_ - May 19, 98 (#44 of 72)
  • Of course we care about your career plans... by Alex Dent - May 20, 98 (#45 of 72)
  • Sunsine Girl, Queen of Grammar If you're going to... by Ronald Kimball - May 20, 98 (#46 of 72)
  • Alex - Who said you don't care?.. by _Sunshine_ - May 20, 98 (#47 of 72)
  • Sob...sniff...Sunshine Girl, I'm broken-hearted!.. by JDough - May 20, 98 (#48 of 72)
  • Thanks, JB - I was teasing... by _Sunshine_ - May 21, 98 (#49 of 72)
  • Gee, I wrote several stories and never got a... by Simon - Jun 5, 98 (#50 of 72)
  • Simon, bud, it's really not what it seems... by _Sunshine_ - Jun 6, 98 (#51 of 72)
  • Simon, poor muffin, I'll read your story too, only... by Peace Destounis - Jun 6, 98 (#52 of 72)
  • Peace~ All my stories are posted under my real... by Simon - Jun 17, 98 (#53 of 72)
  • Simon Aw, now you've gone and just told everyone... by Ronald Kimball - Jun 18, 98 (#54 of 72)
  • Oh!.. by Peace Destounis - Jun 18, 98 (#55 of 72)
  • (I realize you wrote a bit of time ago, I'm... by SeanM - Jul 16, 98 (#56 of 72)
  • hey cort... by {Jessica} - Jul 29, 98 (#57 of 72)
  • Oh, and one more thing... by {Jessica} - Jul 29, 98 (#58 of 72)
  • Hey Jess - glad you could make it :o)Frank wasn't... by _Sunshine_ - Jul 30, 98 (#59 of 72)
  • Sunshine, this was really good... by Carol Freer - Aug 17, 98 (#60 of 72)
  • Hi SG, I read your story earlier but didn't want... by ambika notsonew - Oct 15, 98 (#61 of 72)
  • Thanks for the comments, everyone... by _Sunshine_ - Oct 17, 98 (#62 of 72)
  • I would be thrilled to get that, Sunshine. by - Oct 17, 98 (#63 of 72)
  • I'd love to read it... by Aggie - Oct 17, 98 (#64 of 72)
  • Yeah, count me in... by Alex Dent - Oct 18, 98 (#65 of 72)
  • That should be great. by ambika notsonew - Oct 22, 98 (#66 of 72)
  • Yeah - "should" is the operative word there... by _Sunshine_ - Oct 22, 98 (#67 of 72)
  • Faith is the key, Sunshine. by Alex Dent - Oct 24, 98 (#68 of 72)
  • I'd love to read the re-write, Sunshine!! by Spooky Lady - Dec 1, 98 (#69 of 72)
  • Good story, Sunshine... by Darling Rich - May 10, 99 (#70 of 72)
  • Very good story... by Eclipse - Aug 30, 99 (#71 of 72)
  • Very good story... by Heather Luvs Cows - Aug 6, 01 (#72 of 72)

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