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Spooky Lady - 09:32am Nov 26, 1998 PST
I have a cold.

This is a an extract (possibly the final part) of a story I am planning to write. I suppose it will be the conclusion thinking about it. I am putting it here because it basically describes the whole of the story and I want an opinion as to whether it is any good. Any comments appreciated. Please!! This is a first draft as well so please excuse any obvious mistakes!!


  • CONFESSIONS Dear Mum and Dad, I want to apologise... by Spooky Lady - Nov 26, 98 (#1 of 22)
  • Have read something like this before... by Alex Dent - Nov 26, 98 (#2 of 22)
  • Alex, thanks for your advice... by Spooky Lady - Nov 27, 98 (#3 of 22)
  • I am writing this letter because I suppose you... by Spooky Lady - Nov 27, 98 (#4 of 22)
  • No sorry, I'm being stupid... by Alex Dent - Nov 27, 98 (#5 of 22)
  • I have to say this story made me very... by Fran Hinkel - Nov 27, 98 (#6 of 22)
  • Why do I get the feeling this is real and she is... by - Nov 27, 98 (#7 of 22)
  • Alex, thanks for clearing up the... by Spooky Lady - Nov 27, 98 (#8 of 22)
  • Whew!!.. by _Sunshine_ - Nov 27, 98 (#9 of 22)
  • I recognise the letter format from Dear Poisoner... by Alex Dent - Nov 27, 98 (#10 of 22)
  • By the way... by _Sunshine_ - Nov 27, 98 (#11 of 22)
  • I, too thought that this was in the "A Confession"... by geni - Nov 27, 98 (#12 of 22)
  • It's definitely the situation with Rachel that... by Fran Hinkel - Nov 28, 98 (#13 of 22)
  • I love you all!!!!!.. by Spooky Lady - Nov 30, 98 (#14 of 22)
  • Great story... by Eclipse - Aug 29, 99 (#15 of 22)
  • However if you were to change the ending from the... by Eclipse - Aug 29, 99 (#16 of 22)
  • Good job... by Leah Young - Oct 14, 99 (#17 of 22)
  • Spooky Lady!!.. by R@ven - May 28, 01 (#18 of 22)
  • Good story. by kirsten b - Jun 2, 01 (#19 of 22)
  • Thank you very much for your kind words... by Spooky Lady - Jul 29, 01 (#20 of 22)
  • interesting story... by Lady Vamp I R - Oct 6, 07 (#21 of 22)
  • Hi Spooky Lady... by Wayne Michael - Jan 15, 08 (#22 of 22)

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